For the scene description we had to pick a scene and describe it.
We all helped come up the success criteria
Here it is:
- Has strong adjectives
- Different sentence beginnings
- Different sentence lengths
- A simile and/or alliteration
- Has an introduction, body and conclusion
- Thoughtful word choices
- My goal: Show examples of single, compound and complex sentences.
As I look out around I see the most amazing view. It is a lake, a beautiful and peaceful lake. Just before you reach the peaceful lake there is a long line of beautiful trees stretching all the way around keeping the evergreen pattern. These are no ordinary trees that drop their leaves; they are evergreen. The native meadow I lay on is buzzing with a fresh spring feeling. All the insects around me buzz in harmony just like a choir. The calm lake has a light reflection of the snowy mountains in the distance. My feet feel so smooth in the cold refreshing water. I feel so relaxed and that know this is the place for me.
I hope you enjoyed my writing and I will see you in my next post.