Tuesday, October 20, 2015

Scene description

Hello and welcome back to the blog. It has been a while since I have blogged last and that is because it was the SCHOOL HOLIDAYS! Any way lets get to my blog. Today I am going to be sharing with you my writing, which is a scene description. I am sharing this with you because I think I did a really good job on it like most of my work. I enjoyed this writing because I don't think I have done it before. Lets get onto my work.

For the scene description we had to pick a scene and describe it.
This is my scene that I picked about:

We all helped come up the success criteria
Here it is:
  • Has strong adjectives
  • Different sentence beginnings
  • Different sentence lengths
  • A simile and/or alliteration
  • Has an introduction, body and conclusion
  • Thoughtful word choices
  • My goal: Show examples of single, compound and complex sentences.

My terrific writing:
As I look out around I see the most amazing view. It is a lake, a beautiful and peaceful lake.  Just before you reach the peaceful lake there is a long line of beautiful trees stretching all the way around keeping the evergreen pattern. These are no ordinary trees that drop their leaves; they are evergreen. The native meadow I lay on is buzzing with a fresh spring feeling.  All the insects around me buzz in harmony just like a  choir.  The calm lake has a light reflection of the snowy mountains in the distance. My feet feel so smooth in the cold refreshing water.  I feel so relaxed and that know this is the place for me.

I hope you enjoyed my writing and I will see you in my next post.

1 comment:

  1. I really enjoyed reading this Bella, I felt calm and relaxed just imagining myself in this place.